金龙小学603班   肖煜杭

    Hello, everyone. My name is Hilter. Children’s Day is coming. My mother and I go shopping together.

  Mother: Hilter, let's go shopping!

  Hilter: That's good. But what for？

  M：It is a secret .

  (Now we go  into  a shop.)

  H: Mom, these clothes are so nice!

  M: Hilter, look at this one. Do you like this dress?

  H: No, I don't like this one But I like this vest with the shorts.

M: They are beautiful !  The vest is purple and white. The shorts are blue.

  Salesperson: They are very nice .

  M: How much are they?

  S: The vest is 80 yuan. The shorts are 60 yuan. They are cheap.

   H: Mom! I like them.

  M: OK! We are gong to buy them!

  S: Please wait a minute.  …  Here you are.

  M: Thank you .Here is the money.

S: See you later!

 M: Goodbye. This is  for you. Happy Children's Day!

H: Thank you, mom. You are my best mom!

特邀评委——Kelly教师点评：小作者能自己创造购物的情

景，在购物过程中能流利地使用英语，能举一反三，学以致用，表现出小作者语言组织能力强，口语交际流利,尤其是英语写作能力强。

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